Rational Argument #1

Initial thoughts about a research paper always seem overwhelming. I began by randomly brainstorming about possible reasons why I feel athletes should be compensated. Then, I came up with an outline about possible points I want to make to support my thesis. With those in mind, I began researching various articles that would give me both general and specific information about my topic. There seems to be a lot of information about the topic. I have begun reading through this information to see what might be important for my paper. I think I have come up with three points that I want to concentrate on in my paper. I will continue to research to see if I can find enough supportive evidence for these major points.

I also began writing my introduction. I tried to think of a unique opening to catch the reader’s attention. I then gave some overall information about my topic. My final step was to write a thesis that incorporated the three ideas I want to use in my paper.

I’ve also begun thinking about how many Works Cited entries I might need to be thorough with my research. I want to have various viewpoints from analysts who have opinions on this topic. It will take me some time to sort this out. I want to have enough information, but I want to be concise and not drag out the support for my topic.



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